where are you going
your beating hearts flying high
in the western sky
above frozen fields
into blinding
sunlight
songs of samsara
8 responses to “HEARTBEATS”
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I like this poem. The speaker doesn’t say whether the image addressed is a person or perhaps a flock of geese. Usually I detest ambiguity, particularly in poetry. But I must say that once again you are able to make things work that I would never imagine would! I have thought of you today after reading about how you provide bird videos for your cat to view. And gee, you pay extra for YouTube without commercials? Amazing. I never pay extra to have commercials go away, even though I detest them more than your average viewer. I’ll have to look into that since you’ve given me a lead to follow! I hope your day is going well. Kinda rough day for me last evening, and then I didn’t get good sleep last night so felt like crap for much of this day, but now I’m doing well and hoping for a great evening! Peter
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Well Peter… YouTube is the most annoying of all I think… it’s worth it to pay extra to me because I watch YT all day !!! I don’t pay for cable tv… only internet…so I rely on YT for my entertainment, etc.
I’ve been taking lots of sunset & sky photos the past year or so… during my lapse in painting…. At least it’s being creative…and letting the photo be the inspiration for writing poetry….
I really appreciate your feedback !
Thank you Peter 🪷LikeLike
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Wonderful idea to take photos to inspire your poetry writing! You inspire me!!! Again, I’ll look up YouTube to see cost of skipping commercials. Like you, I spend a lot of time on there, though it sounds as if you spend even MORE. I often find I get lost in all their wonderful offerings. If I view dance or music videos I sometimes look up to see an hour or more has passed!!!
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It costs about $20 for Premium YT. I subscribe to hundreds of channels…some I love sooooooooo much, and it’s soooooo annoying for commercials constantly interrupting…
Not only have I been taking photos to inspire but I’ve been writing poems to go with my art …it’s really interesting to see what emerges when you write spontaneously…or stream of consciousness…
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ZONGS OF ZAMZARA 
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