songs of samsara

SURPRISE

sitting in my car

smoking a black and mild cigar

wondering what to write next

suddenly a mouse

dances on a bush nearby

what a nice surprise

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2 responses to “SURPRISE”

  1. schmooley Avatar
    schmooley

    Nice haiku-ish poem! Really like it.

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  2. ZONGS OF ZAMZARA Avatar
    ZONGS OF ZAMZARA

    A funny thing about this encounter… as I was sitting there, trying to think of the next line… that just would not come… I noticed a “leaf” moving on a bare branch of a bush in front of me… so I was looking at it… thinking of incorporating the lonely leaf blowing… then it started moving all over the place and then I realized it was a MOUSE !!!! Funny how that haiku went… haikus are supposed to be “ in the moment “ ….spontaneous…. so that was funny….

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