songs of samsara

UNBEARABLE

the emptiness i feel

is almost unbearable

no lover in site

no kiss goodnight

my life force dwindling

the day’s spending

faster than ever

alone and alone

where is my home

as i roam

the night

in my dreams

looking for meanings

the intermingling

of subconscious

subliminal

mysterious

beings

when will i

ever

fall in love

again

is this

the end

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4 responses to “UNBEARABLE”

  1. schmooley Avatar
    schmooley

    One edit for you” rome should be spelled “roam,” I believe. I like all these poems of yearning love.  Are they directed at someone specifically, a past lover? (That’s what I suspect; perhaps you’ve told me already and I have forgotten).  For what it’s worth, I also feel the same yearnings.  But I keep this within.  I don’t know why. Nancy is out of town the next six days, visiting Sabrina while her hubby is attending meetings in FL.  Come see me–HA! The weather has been really nice but is supposed to cool again.  I hope you are feeling happier than your poetry. Peter

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    1. ZONGS OF ZAMZARA Avatar
      ZONGS OF ZAMZARA

      Most of the love sick stuff is about my first love….. a very traumatic ending…let alone the last traumatic relationship I recently left…..

      Ha … thanks for the correction… I knew I spelled it wrong but I forgot to correct it before I posted….

      Whatever I’m feeling in the moment is the impetus of what I write…. I just gotta get it out… like when an artist gets inspired to paint something….

      Men do not like to expose their feelings like women I suppose…
      Men see it as a weakness ?
      I don’t care…. I use it as a creative tool…. Feelings are everything…..they should not be ignored…. I am very intuitive ….
      To me ..it’s important to be honest and spontaneous…

      Have you been writing lately ?

      Ha .

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      1. schmooley Avatar
        schmooley

        You’re a true artist, both with your painting and with your poetry.  You create for the right reasons…!

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        1. ZONGS OF ZAMZARA Avatar
          ZONGS OF ZAMZARA

          Yeah… it helps to be half crazy too …

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