ZONGS OF ZAMZARA

songs of samsara

YOU TOOK YOUR LOVE

away from me

leaving me

leaving me in misery

little did I realize

it wasn’t love

because love is kind

it would never hurt me

or desert me

so you took your love away

but mine remained

inside of me

and dwells in my heart

and dwells in my heart

dwells in my heart

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2 responses to “YOU TOOK YOUR LOVE”

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    schmooley

    really nice job using repetition to make your point.  I’ve actually written several similar poems. 

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      ZONGS OF ZAMZARA

      Yeah…. If I was a musician I’d make music out of some of my poems….

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